Gudil

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My first complain - dont do "no choice" choices. When you refuse, it just ends - or it just continues anyway. That is not a real choice. (e.g. the bar, where it doesnt matter what you pick)

Then there are so many characters and perspective shifts - it is just confusing. The "MC" has probably the smallest part in this. Most of the time you see other ppl do stuff.

So its a linear VN without any real choice - you can just end it early and no real protagonist. Its more like a porn movie to click thru.

Oh and then the font - serif fonts are not that great to read on screens - you can use that for buttons/headline and stuff, but you should not use it for continuous text.

The clips and images are fine, and overall the writing is ok, but tbh - as I said - you can just watch a porn movie and get the same linear experience.
I only agree with "no choice choices" and about the font used. Other than that I welcome more vns without a fixed protagonist. I mean, it feel more like a novel, with it being a visual novel and all..
 

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Santis

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I think I have read the word "shaft" enough for a lifetime.

Honest feedback OP: look for synonyms.
 

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This is the story of the personal and professional lives of the employees of the venture capital firm 'Future Capital'. When Future Capital came into the scene first, nobody even took them seriously. But in just a decade, they have managed to ascend to the top of New Yark City's cutthroat corporate world as well as expand to neighboring cities. You will see the good, the bad, and the ugly side of a bunch of people if you choose to go along for this ride.​

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Manticore96

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For now, yes. But I plan to implement some level of choice based content in the future updates.
Next update time ??? How frequently will you update this game. Because i have played a number of this HTML games. And those devs loose the passion or become worn out after sometime. Leaving a good HTML XXX Game abandoned most of the time :(
 

Veruthe

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Next update time ??? How frequently will you update this game. Because i have played a number of this HTML games. And those devs loose the passion or become worn out after sometime. Leaving a good HTML XXX Game abandoned most of the time :(
Monthly updates since I have to balance out working on this with my day job. Also I will be posting weekly updates on patreon.
 
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Manticore96

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Monthly updates since I have to balance out working on this with my day job. Also I will be posting weekly updates on patreon.
Good. But sad Patreon is not supported in my country. Can u have a Paypal or Gpay gate for me if possible ???
 

Veruthe

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Oct 17, 2018
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Any future genre about this game? And i hope this game didn't die like any html games
At the moment, I have the story mapped out till episode 3. I have some romance content and a bit of blackmail content for chapter 2. That is all I can share at the moment. If you enjoyed chapter 1, please leave a good rating. It would help me out a lot. One more thing I will be leaving weekly updates on patreon so please check it out too if you are interested.
 

Forgotted

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Hello,
Couple of questions please

It's male and/or female protagonist. Does that mean I'm playing
both during the game or I choose one at the start and stay solely
with it?

It was mentioned above that it's mostly kinetic at the moment. Is it
still like that in chapter 2?

Thank you so much
Best of luck
Cheers
 

Veruthe

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Oct 17, 2018
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Hello,
Couple of questions please

It's male and/or female protagonist. Does that mean I'm playing
both during the game or I choose one at the start and stay solely
with it?

It was mentioned above that it's mostly kinetic at the moment. Is it
still like that in chapter 2?

Thank you so much
Best of luck
Cheers
From chapter 2 onwards, it will be like an interactive novel. There are multiple characters that that comes in focus on each chapter. As of chapter 2, there are choice based content. Nothing too crazy yet but every choice is logged and will come into play as the story unfolds in the future. I hope that answers your questions.
Thanks for the wishes.
 
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Veruthe

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Oct 17, 2018
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Veruthe Some videos are not getting load. Can you please fix them, if possible ?
Im sharing you save file + pic of the error in
Thanks for letting me know. Unfortunately, I am stuck at work at the moment. Will look into it as soon as I can.
 

Manticore96

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Feb 16, 2021
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Thanks for letting me know. Unfortunately, I am stuck at work at the moment. Will look into it as soon as I can.
Ok.I thought only I was facing the problem. Hoping if you can look into it soon. Will it take more than Days/Week ?
 
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